Tuesday, 13 January 2009

Rough Edit / One More Kiss

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1 comment:

Miss Khan said...

Looks good girls, nice sense of tension established and good range of shot types and framing. The shot through the open door is particularly effective and create a real sense of enigma.

Targets- length is an issue, try and be tighter with your shots and trim a couple of seconds off each one.

The door scene is effective, why not repeat it several more time so it acts as a motif?

Your titles are a little old-fashioned and dont fully connote the genre- try to find others you can download and go for a simpler colour such as grey/white.