Audience Feedback

After screening our thriller we received audience feedback.

Positive

"i like the eyes opening at the end"

"niceee cameraaa angles and panning out 4 effect"

"i like the short sharp cuts of action"

"The soundtrack is really good"

"The plot and story-line is very gripping and original"

"great mise-en-scene and cinematography"

"Editing created a good atmosphere and mood for the thriller"

Negative

"u need 2 put some more heart into the acting though"

"The house being trashed could sound more realistic"

"acting is okayyyyy could be more authentic"

Making The Thriller Music

We had to make our own original music soundtrack because we couldn't use copy written music.

Final Production - One More Kiss

  

2nd One More Kiss

Rough Edit / One More Kiss

Call sheet2

Thriller: One More Kiss

Crew: Rhianna Crawford and Sin U Chang as Directors

Marcell Croll-Meddar as Male antagonist

Alana as Female character

Shoot: inside living room and the bed room

Date: 12/12/08

Location: Ian's artwork/ Max's house

Contact: 07901827654/ 07767858863 (Ian's Artwork: 020 86750884)

Camera Kit: 4

Taps nos: 2

Props: Fake Blood, Photo Frame, costume, ribena 

Costume: Suite, Pajamas.

Transport: Walking

Weather: Normal around 4.50-8.30

Filming Schedule

• Date: 24/11/08
• Time: period 3,4
• Activity: Planning Location Recce
• Notes: filing in all the paper work

• Date: 25/11/08
• Time: period 2,4 and after school
• Activity: Storyboard, Casting
• Notes: finish the annotation next to the storyboard e.g. camera shot, lighting etc

• Date: 26/11/08
• Time: after school
• Activity: Props
• Notes: went to buy a photo frame

• Date: 27/11/08
• Time: after school
• Activity: editing storyboard
• Notes: editing storyboard

• Date: 28/11/08
• Time: period 2,3,4
• Activity: Props
• Notes: Get ingredient to make Fade blood.

• Date: 01/12/08
• Time: break-time, After school
• Activity: editing Storyboard
• Notes: add soundtrack and narrater in the storyboard

• Date: 02/12/08
• Time: lunch-time,After school
• Activity: Recce and Production Log
• Notes: to complete and put in our blog

• Date: 03/12/08
• Time: period 4
• Activity: finding company logo for the opening for the thriler
  Notes: we chosen new line cinema for the opening.

• Date: 05/12/08
• Time: after school
• Activity: filming our thriller
• Note: finish all the filming on that date!

• Date: 08/12/08
• Time: period 5
• Activity: editing
• Note: edit our thriller and add soundtrack.

• Date: 12/12/08
• Time: 04.50pm- 08.30pm
• Activity: Re film
• Note: finish all the bit we need to re-film

• Date: 15/12/08
• Time: period 5 and after school
• Activity: editing
• Note: to complete the editing

• Date: 16/12/08
• Time: period 2 & 5
• Activity: editing blooper/ editing thriller 
• Note: complete editing

• Date: 17/12/08
• Time: period 4
• Activity: improve group blog
• Note: upload the latest information 

• Date: 05/01/09
• Time: period 5
• Activity:  going through second draft with Ms Berry
• Note: to improve the film

• Date: 06/01/09
• Time: period 2 & 5
• Activity: editing, try to cut down to meet the time limit 
• Note: improve title, fade etc.

• Date: 07/01/09
• Time: Period 4
• Activity: editing and composing more music
• Note: make it relate to the film.

• Date: 12/01/09
  
• Time: period 5 & after school
  
• Activity: making trashing fir the film
  
• Note: make it real.

• Date:13/01/09
• Time: period 2&5
• Activity: editing the trash sound in to it
• Note: teacher said the trashing sound, sound fake, so we trying to make it sound real.

• Date:14/01/09
• Time: Period 4
• Activity: editing sound and cutting bits out
• Note: changed title .

• Date: 16/01/09
• Time: Period 1
• Activity: final check for editing, sound and export to quicktime
• Note: check is there anything need to changed.